Thursday, August 12, 2021

My Hook


On Your Mark Get set GO!!

Number 42 underwater Athlete sprints as fast as he could. I dived into the water and swam beside cute baby fish, but I carried on the race . I was nearly there to the finished line and the other athletes were catching up but, I kicked and kicked, then I won and got a gold medal!!




8 comments:

  1. Nice work. You have a quality piece of writing with good ideas and great punctuation. Ka pai.

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  2. Well done for getting first Maryberth.It couldn't of been easy running against this group.They look pretty fit.

    What did you do to train for the race?.

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  3. Good morning Maryberth.
    I hope that you and your family are doing well and having some fun times together during this extended break from school.
    Take care and keep safe.

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  4. Good morning Maryberth.
    I hope you have a wonderful day,even though it's raining!
    Take care and keep safe.

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  5. Good afternoon Maryberth.
    I hope all is going well for you and your bubble.
    What have you been doing with yourself?.
    I have been busy gardening and tidying up.

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  6. I am looking forward to seeing what you have been working on during lock down Maryberth.
    Have a great weekend.

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  7. How was your first day back Maryberth?.I enjoyed settling back into the school routine.

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